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andyhaus1057
Oct 23, 2008, 03:02 PM
Hello,
I'm applying for a large corporation next week and I need to make sure that my resume looks its best. Can you please help me edit it?

Mark Kent
[Contact information removed for privacy.]

Education

ITT Technical College

Major: Applied Science
Minor: Psychology
Anticipated Graduation: December 2009

Experience
Forklift operator
Kaskaskia Tool & Machine New Athens, IL February 2008 - Present
• Lift and stack articles using a forklift
• Log daily operations
• Ensure that goods are properly stored
Server
Applebee's, Swansea, IL March 2005 – Feb 2006
• Learned to work in team situations when working with fellow employees
• Provided excellent customer relations
• Responsible for overseeing daily operations of the restaurant

Shift leader

Dairy Queen, Freeburg, IL June 2000- Jan 2005
• Counted money at the end of the night
• Made sure all tasks were completed by employees
• Customer escalation specialist

Skills
• Excellent organizational skills and high attention to detail
• Self starter, ability to take initiative and fulfill responsibilities
• Experienced with e-mail communication and the Internet for business information, research and presentation

References Available Upon Request

Clough
Oct 23, 2008, 06:14 PM
Hi, andyhaus1057!

Sure, I and/or others will be along to help you sometime. I did need to remove your contact information to protect your privacy. I appreciate your understanding with my having to do that. I would hate to have you get spammed a lot with things in the mail or in email because of all the contact information that you had in your post.

Just looking after your best interests here!

Later...

Wondergirl
Oct 23, 2008, 06:30 PM
Mark Kent
Street
City, State, Zip
Phone
E-mail Address

Skills
• Excellent organizational skills with high attention to detail
• Self starter; takes initiative and fulfills responsibilities
• Skillfully uses e-mail communication and the Internet to obtain business information, for research, and to create presentations

Education
ITT Technical College, City, State
Anticipated Graduation: December 2009
Major: Applied Science; Minor: Psychology

Experience
Forklift Operator, Kaskaskia Tool & Machine, New Athens, IL (February 2008 - Present)
• Lifts and stacks articles with forklift
• Logs daily operations
• Ensures that goods are properly handled and stored

Server, Applebee's, Swansea, IL (March 2005 – Feb 2006)
• Worked in team situations with fellow employees
• Provided excellent customer service
• Oversaw daily operations of the restaurant

Shift leader, Dairy Queen, Freeburg, IL (June 2000- Jan 2005)
• Reconciled registers daily
• Supervised [how many?] employees
• Specialized in marketing and customer escalation

References available upon request

andyhaus1057
Oct 28, 2008, 06:40 PM
Thank you for all of your help. You've been great! :)



Mark Kent
Street
City, State, Zip
Phone
E-mail Address

Skills
• Excellent organizational skills with high attention to detail
• Self starter; takes initiative and fulfills responsibilities
• Skillfully uses e-mail communication and the Internet to obtain business information, for research, and to create presentations

Education
ITT Technical College, City, State
Anticipated Graduation: December 2009
Major: Applied Science; Minor: Psychology

Experience
Forklift Operator, Kaskaskia Tool & Machine, New Athens, IL (February 2008 - Present)
• Lifts and stacks articles with forklift
• Logs daily operations
• Ensures that goods are properly handled and stored

Server, Applebee’s, Swansea, IL (March 2005 – Feb 2006)
• Worked in team situations with fellow employees
• Provided excellent customer service
• Oversaw daily operations of the restaurant

Shift leader, Dairy Queen, Freeburg, IL (June 2000- Jan 2005)
• Reconciled registers daily
• Supervised [how many?] employees
• Specialized in marketing and customer escalation

References available upon request