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day1216
Sep 22, 2008, 07:09 PM
I need a good thesis statement on:
I have a terrible job.
I was thinking of saying that I worked in a factory and that I get minimun wage, following orders(bossed around) and overworked as in too many hours of working.

Can someone please help me.
It has to be college material.

Thanks

Clough
Sep 22, 2008, 10:30 PM
Hi, day1216!

What kind of thesis is this concerning and what were the specific instructions that you were given concerning writing it, please? It would be helpful to know about that first in order to help you the best here.

Thanks!

sexy joyce
Sep 25, 2008, 07:10 PM
Hello, It has to be a strong thesis statement with a point by point.