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keke2168
Apr 27, 2008, 03:13 PM
Revise this sentence. When reviewing resumes', applicants with great references and great sales experience are always given great preference by our HR director.

ryanmf
Apr 27, 2008, 03:26 PM
When reviewing resumes, applicants with great references and great sales experience are always given great preference by our HR Director.