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happy711
Mar 19, 2008, 08:44 PM
Can you help me continue this poem about what freedom means to you:
(Preferably rhymes)

Freedom is being able to live your life right,
Saying what you believe in without fright

Clough
Mar 20, 2008, 01:41 AM
Can you help me continue this poem about what freedom means to you:
(Preferably rhymes)

Freedom is being able to live your life right,
saying what you believe in without fright

Sure, no problem!

The cost to have a reality of freedom can be high,
But, I would rather work for freedom than to live a lie.

Interesting thread you have started here! I do like these sort of things. Would you mind letting us know why you have started this, please.

Thanks!

happy711
Mar 20, 2008, 07:01 AM
"Would you mind letting us know why you have started this, please."

I like to attempt to rap (I am the worst rapper you have ever seen in your life) but its fun. I randomly chose the topic of freedom because I thought it would be easy. By rapping, I mean telling my friends but they usually make fun of me=). It is also fun to see what other people have wrote.
Story about rapping: This one time I wrote a rap about my science teacher and the kids next to me found out. The whole class was chanting my name to read it but I really didn't want to. So I gave it to a guy to read and everyone told me how bad but funny it was includind my teacher. It took some time out of class so I believe that was worth it.

Pharaoh_10
Apr 1, 2008, 07:31 AM
Freedom is being able to live your life right,
Saying what you believe in without fright

Freedom is being able to kick some sheet
And then go and have a steak or meat

Freedom is being able to take a leak
Without a fear of being beaten by the meek

Freedom is when you squeeze your girlfriend's [edit]
And then don't run, look at her eyes and don't feel gritty