ally123
Dec 6, 2007, 07:58 PM
OK just to make this clear I'm not cutting and I'm not going to kill myself and I'm 15 so please tell me what you think of my poem
Over and over again I scream
While over and over again I rip at the seam
The kiss of a razor blade touch
Blood continually draining
I can see my life fading
Releasing all things that make me scream and shout
I tear open my life and the blood pours out
So tonight is the night that I silently cry
Slowly fading
Wishing the world goodbye
Because tonight is the night I finally die
I will not wake up tomorrow
Can't you see
So you don't have to pretend you care about me
I know you couldn't see the hurt in my eyes
From the face I put on for a disguise
So tonight I sit and cry my last tear
And let go of the things that I held so dear
I see my life slipping by
Tonight is the night I finally die
Over and over again I scream
While over and over again I rip at the seam
The kiss of a razor blade touch
Blood continually draining
I can see my life fading
Releasing all things that make me scream and shout
I tear open my life and the blood pours out
So tonight is the night that I silently cry
Slowly fading
Wishing the world goodbye
Because tonight is the night I finally die
I will not wake up tomorrow
Can't you see
So you don't have to pretend you care about me
I know you couldn't see the hurt in my eyes
From the face I put on for a disguise
So tonight I sit and cry my last tear
And let go of the things that I held so dear
I see my life slipping by
Tonight is the night I finally die