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Becca74
Sep 30, 2007, 12:04 PM
He took my heart broke it in two
Ripped it apart and shattered it right though
He never cared so why do I
Sitting right here I start to cry
Painful it hurts all you can do is say goodbye
Try your best when you don't succeed
Fall on your knees and start to pleed
Why does it hurt so much... make it stop
Maybe it will be better when I bleed
Tears and blood fall down and plop on the floor
With one last breath its over I say... I love you once more

Bluerose
Sep 30, 2007, 12:42 PM
I think its poetic.