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serena6878
Jul 16, 2007, 02:01 PM
It is not because of the loneliness that I think of you;
It is because of thinking of you, I begin to be lonely.

Clough
Jul 17, 2007, 11:43 PM
It is not because of the loneliness that I think of you;
It is because of thinking of you, I begin to be lonely.
And, I begin to be lonely, when love is near.
Near and yet so far away.

serena6878
Jul 18, 2007, 12:51 PM
It is not because of the loneliness that I think of you;
It is because of thinking of you, I begin to be lonely.
And, I begin to be lonely, when love is near.
Near and yet so far away.

How are you, Clough?

You make it a wonderfully complete poem.

Thank you!

Clough
Jul 18, 2007, 01:29 PM
Hey thanks, serena6878!

I am fine. How are you?

Please keep up the poetic thoughts. I think that you are really good at that sort of thing!