View Full Version : How to write a email to a potential vendor
lawrenceant
May 10, 2013, 07:44 AM
HI I have a online business that has been running for almost 2 year =s now. IT is in the process of re-brnading and I ned help contacting new and better vendors to provide customers with exclusive/better merchandise. Can you help draft something that is professional and catching so the supplier would regret to not do business with us.
JudyKayTee
May 10, 2013, 07:46 AM
What is brnading? I don't think telling prospective people they will regret not dealing with you is a good marketing tool. Telling them why they should buy from you is a better idea.
What product or service?
lawrenceant
May 10, 2013, 07:51 AM
Sorry about that, fast typing. Re-branding i.e. New web design, new logo etc. My business is selling woman shoes online. I want to differ from other online independent shoe stores and offer a better selection and become worldwide, go to site. The company name is based on woman working together and building up one another and supporting each other in various business ventures
joypulv
May 10, 2013, 07:54 AM
No one wants to read self promotion or what someone thinks about their own business, a product, or a service. They want facts and figures. So make a list of specs and prices. Links to customer reviews are good too (I rely on them heavily as a consumer). Keep it all to ONE SCREEN and use links!
Be aware that over 90% of your emails will end up in spam or will be deleted without being read.