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Tom80
Jul 8, 2012, 06:41 PM
First attempt. Any kind of feedback welcome.. I kind of wrote it with a melody in my head. Don't know if anyone can see or hear what I mean. Maybe it's helpful to say I like Nirvana, Depeche Mode, Pearl Jam, Radiohead, dEUS, Blur, Qotsa, Eels,.


Title: Mind vs heart

They'll always say
You think too much
But why is it
I have to be that one

We had some fun
Talked a lot
Didn't care about that much

(refrain) Mind your heart, mind your heart
Sometimes things look ed up
Mind your heart, mind your heart
But please remind
How we start

I guess this is
The way life goes
Never thought it
But it's a disease

The ones I care about
Are in my heart
But the mind plays tricks, I sure can miss

That's why I guess
We think that much

(refrain) Mind your heart, mind your heart
Sometimes things look ed up
Mind your heart, mind your heart
But please remind
How we start

Mind your heart, mind your heart
But keep in mind
We can't restart

Tom80
Jul 8, 2012, 06:44 PM
////explicit ;)