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TheAbyssBand
May 16, 2012, 10:42 PM
OK so this song was written about a year ago I was in my room with nothing to do and nowhere to go I really didn't leave except to eat and use the bathroom so I just became a bit crazy sitting in my white walled room I guess and wrote this it's based upon my minds illusion and metaphor enjoy


White walls


White walls are all around me

Drift away & take your soul

Darkness fades into light time

Evil souls here are mine


Sittin' Here in the courtyard

watching you pass by me

White walls take your soul again

Here I come fading passed

Chorus
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These white walls they enclose me

keep me sane through the day

Cloudy sky's bring in the rain

The parasite attacks my brain
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Guitar solo/Short
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Shadows of Blue & Gray

Attach Their prey

Craziness lurks around me

Driving me insane
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Chorus
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White walls control the system

Create the taxes we pay

Should I wait a lonely lifetime

Or go with the day

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Chorus
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X4 White Walls , Oh White Walls