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Carmenliu
Mar 12, 2012, 04:40 PM
I remember when I a baby,
I barely talks.
I remember when I was learning how to walk,
Fell two times on the same spot.

I remember when supper time comes,
Always took me more than an hour to finish.
I remember when the first day of school,
I cried so much because I missed mom and dad.

I remember when Kelly and I were alone,
We got in trouble because we played with fire.
I remember when we doing dishes,
Forgot to turn off the tape.

I remember all those great things that happened when I was young.
It has become nothing but memory,
The ones that I will remember within my life.
That was my childhood.

Carmenliu
Mar 12, 2012, 05:29 PM
I remembered when I was a child,
I barely talked.
I remembered when I was learning to walk,
Fell two times on the same spot.

I remember the first day of school,
I cried so much because I missed mom and dad.
I remember when supper time comes,
Always take me more than an hour to finish.

I remembered when Kelly and I were alone,
We got into trouble because we played with fire.
I remembered when we were doing the dishes,
The tape was on for an hour.

I remember all those delightful things that happened when I was young.
It has become nothing but memories,
But all the joyful times will live on within me.

Carmenliu
Mar 12, 2012, 05:32 PM
I remembered when I was a baby,
I barely talked.
I remembered when I was learning to walk,
Fell two times on the same spot.

I remembered the first day of school,
I cried so much because I missed mom and dad.
I remembered when supper time comes,
Always take me more than an hour to finish.

I remembered when Kelly and I were alone,
We got into trouble because we played with fire.
I remembered when we were doing the dishes,
The tape was on for an hour.

I remember all those delightful things that happened when I was young.
It has become nothing but memories,
But all the joyful times will live on within me.