I have been working on writing a song for my boyfriend on the piano and I just want some feedback on the song (not my playing) before I go any further. Thanks :) here's the link -- My Song (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BxiitNp5QUA&list=HL1325976328&feature=mh_lolz)

You're a good pianist! (I had years of lessons and can't play by ear.)

Are you going to write lyrics for it?

Thanks wondergirl, I took two or three lessons when I was eight or so and I can't read sheet music so I just memorize it and record songs that I make in case I forget. I don't think I am going to write lyrics for it because I am not comfortable with singing in public, but thanks :)

Very good! I think it would sound very good in an alternative or mainstream rock song, like in the background. Very impressive!

Nice melody and beautifully played. You sure you're not interested in writing lyrics? A couple of possibilities just ran through my head. And if your writing skills compare to your music writing skills you could have a really nice song on your hands.

It reminded me of the original piano melodies of Jim Brickman or David Lanz or even of John Tesh's songs.

I agree with LadySam. As I was listening to it, I could feel words in there.