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JimPickens
Oct 23, 2011, 03:36 PM
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I can't stop thinking about you

If I could live forever
I know exactly what I would do,
I'd spend the rest of my life being with you

I don't know if you have a boyfriend or not
But I don't care I will give it a shot

So here it comes, this is the end
So Haley will you be my girlfriend


My first poem ever written. Good? Please let me know.