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mizzcurly
Jul 10, 2009, 04:46 AM
Heyyyy!!

Iv'e just written this poem for my boyfriend, not sure if its any good, but thought I'd just share it with you :-D


Poem for my boyfriend:

''We've known each other ages and look where we are now...
Who would have thought that you would be my boy and I'd be your gal :P

You make me smile from head to toe,
And yes we've both been hurt in the past but I have a good feeling about this... sometimes you just know.

When I'm with you I feel warm, happy and complete,
When you kiss me I get butterflies and go all giggly as if you're tickling my feet :P

The future is like a blank canvas... but thing I know for certain is I don't want this feeling to go away!
Thank you for just being you and the sweet things you always say :)

If you look into my eyes you will see you don't need to worry,
Because handsome man I'm here to stay and wish Sunday would just hurry!! '' <3 x x x <3

spiritcharms
Jul 10, 2009, 06:00 AM
it's a lovely way to express your feelings for him. I'm sure he will appreciate it very much. Your poem says a lot x

enjoy your Sunday as its nearly here!! :)