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paigerwaiger94
Jun 25, 2009, 07:56 AM
Forgetting.

Forgetting, all the hurt that you have been through will be hell.
Just know, that I am here because you saved me from myself,
From my own personal hell.
So when my time comes,
Promise me that you won't remember,
All the cruel and wicked things I've done.
Let it be, your assurance to know,
That when my time comes, I'll be ready to go.
You always had a knack,
For putting yourself last,
So from now on...
The first thing I think of,
When I think to the past...
Will be you.
And your memorys of forgetting.
Forgetting all the hurt that you have been through will be hell.
Just know, that I am still alive, because you somehow managed to save me from myself.

Please tell me what you think of my new poem.

88sunflower
Jun 25, 2009, 09:59 AM
Its nice. Seems to be full of emotion.

jenniepepsi
Jun 25, 2009, 10:00 AM
I love it! Very good. You have a great talent! Thanks for sharing it.

paigerwaiger94
Jun 25, 2009, 07:28 PM
Thank you guys for commenting on my poems.

nothing lasts
Aug 4, 2009, 10:43 AM
I adore it!thanks for sharing it