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paigerwaiger94
Jun 23, 2009, 06:46 PM
My friend.
I don't know what it is,
That you saw in me.
Said my love was a distraction,
That you didn't really need.
Somewhere in this time,
I surely fell in love.
Our lives intertwined,
My angel from above.
So I cried most every night,
Knowing it must end.
You didn't love as I did.
I was "just a friend."
I've always heard the saying,
All good things must end.
So I guess this is goodbye.
Nice loving you...
My friend.



Please tell me what you think.

BeautyFromPain7
Jun 23, 2009, 08:50 PM
It's great. Really nice job! :)

mudweiser
Jun 23, 2009, 09:01 PM
I like it. Good work.

Sarah

paigerwaiger94
Jun 24, 2009, 09:24 AM
Thank you guys for commenting.

nothing lasts
Aug 4, 2009, 10:47 AM
Your amazing that's what I could say

paigerwaiger94
Aug 4, 2009, 11:03 AM
Thank you!!