In memory:
If I had to go through it again,
And go through all the pain,
I would do it in a heartbeat,
For everything to gain.
Through all my imperfections,
You only gave me love,
Until the day you left me,
For heaven up above.
I still feel you with me...
Still feel you when I wake.
I still feel the pain,
Still revel in the heartache.
You will always be a memory,
In my mind and in my heart.
Though your no longer with me,
Our souls will never part.
I never got the chance,
To say how much I cared.
So this is in memory,
Of everything we've shared.


Please tell me what you think.

This is only the second poem of yours that I've read on here. But I think you've got a lot of talent from the little bit I've gotten to read

I love it:)

Thank you guys for your comments.

It's really sad and it made me cry a lot.is it true what u wrote?

Yes, its true.

That's a very deep poem but its beautiful. Poetry is art and you have ccreated a masterpeice!! Love it. Keep writing :D

Beautiful,very heartfelt and endearing !
Keep writing ,your emotion comes through beautifully!