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ironclad04
Jun 6, 2009, 07:25 PM
Ironclad here people, got something good for u guys to work on, takes some good skills!
How quickly can you find out what is unusual about this paragraph? It looks so ordinary that you would think nothing was wrong with it at all, and in fact nothing is wrong with it. But it is unusual. Why? If u study it, and think about it, you may find out, but I will not assist you in any way. You must do this without coaching. No doubt, if you work on it for half an hour it will dawn on you... who knows?? Now try your brain skills on this!
Wondergirl
Jun 6, 2009, 07:28 PM
No letter "e" in it.
mudweiser
Jun 6, 2009, 07:38 PM
Ironclad here people, got something good for u guys to work on, takes some good skills!
How quickly can you find out what is unusual about this paragraph? It looks so ordinary that you would think nothing was wrong with it at all, and in fact nothing is wrong with it. But it is unusual. Why? If u study it, and think about it, you may find out, but i will not assist you in any way. You must do this without coaching. No doubt, if you work on it for half an hour it will dawn on you.... who knows??? Now try your brain skills on this!
The red show some errors.
I also believe there is a comma splice in your paragraph.
Sarah
ironclad04
Jun 6, 2009, 07:39 PM
No letter "e" in it.
Wow! Pretty good smarty pants! Lol
ironclad04
Jun 6, 2009, 07:40 PM
The red show some errors.
I also believe there is a comma splice in your paragraph.
Sarah
I know, my bad!?
Wondergirl
Jun 6, 2009, 07:44 PM
I also believe there is a comma splice in your paragraph.
No comma splice. And he needs a few more commas here and there.
startover22
Jun 7, 2009, 01:21 PM
No letter "e" in it.
I thought it was when he used a "u" to say "you", I would have never gotten that there were no e's in it! Great job!
ironclad04
Jun 7, 2009, 07:29 PM
I thought it was when he used a "u" to say "you", I would have never gotten that there were no e's in it! Great job!
Thanks guys! Its just an open humor type thing I did in school long time ago, I almost took poetry too! But thanks for the feedback!
Wondergirl
Jun 7, 2009, 07:34 PM
Thanks guys!! its just an open humor type thing i did in school long time ago, I almost took poetry too! but thanks for the feedback!!
Next time, copy the thing correctly, so you don't lead anyone down a blind alley.
ironclad04
Jun 7, 2009, 07:51 PM
Next time, copy the thing correctly, so you don't lead anyone down a blind alley.
Do u have something better than ironclad?? Lol thanks for the feedback though!