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chris312
May 31, 2009, 02:48 PM
For instance, the night Nancy waited thirty minutes to be repositon and change in bed. Sandra tells Nancy to wait a minute and goes to talk to Craig and don't come back to thirty minutes later

Perito
May 31, 2009, 02:58 PM
That night, Nancy waited in bed for thirty minutes to be repositioned and changed. Sandra asked Nancy to wait a minute. She proceeded to talk to Craig and didn't come return until at least thirty minutes later.