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TheRomanticDude
May 24, 2009, 09:30 AM
Ok well this is another song... Its not finished so if you want to you can help me finish it but yeah tell me what you think about it

Her life is fading and were just waiting
Cause there's nothing we can do..
Her dreams are so clear she learned the hard way
Maybe someday she'll change her mind..
And I'm just praying that her mind clears
I knew the problem then and I knew that its so bad...

She's so exciting, She's so inviting, and She's way to pretty
To throw it all away and I will be there for her
Cause when she's around me everythings a blur

BackFrumTheDead
Jun 5, 2009, 05:47 PM
Her life is fading and were just waiting
Cause there's nothing we can do..
Her dreams are so clear she learned the hard way
Maybe someday she'll change her mind..
And I'm just praying that her mind clears
I knew the problem then and I knew that its so bad...

She's so exciting, She's so inviting, and She's way to pretty
To throw it all away and I will be there for her
Cause when she's around me everythings a blur
Her mustache is actually animal fur
I love the way she pets it
When she's bored she looks enorexic

I like to make her smile
But then she makes a pile of her arm pit hair
That she won at the fair

I told her to shave her face
But she looked at me in disgrace
She said to never lie
But I really had to try

Her face blurred my eyes
Her body bruised the lies
That I told her every day
I said stay away,
But she never said okay

I got tired of the lying
All the hate and the crying
I told her ill hug you and ill kiss you
But don't come crying to me if I accidentally diss you

KintaBoB
Jun 6, 2009, 06:09 PM
Lmao @ BackFromTheDead