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jeffrey michael
Apr 10, 2009, 09:58 AM
My light has turned to dark.

My Soul has lost its spark.

My Love has left me empty.

Its more than I dreamt it would be.

So overwhelming with pain.

With my tears falling like rain.

Despair has set in for good.

There is no Hope that I could.

Ever get you back in my arms.

I have done no good only harm.

I wish you would just stay and never go.

But I have no choice but to let you grow.

You're my wants my needs the reason I breath.

Now Im alone and dying with no light left seen.

I will always have you, but only in my dreams.

Holding you close as I see your face beam.

Now I just reach for you at night wishing you were there.

Alone I lay here for your voice I want to hear.

For one last kiss, a touch, a smile.

Just to see you again if only for a while.

This is all I have to give.

Without you I will just not be able to Live.

As I wipe my face filled with tears from my eyes.

This is the hardest thing to say to you, " Goodbye "




JMT

OwlM
Apr 15, 2009, 08:59 AM
Well its your feelings so I cannot judge them, only can say if it helps don't stop. But don't see real question here, but be sure your thoughts are now immortal.
Lol

Wondergirl
Apr 15, 2009, 09:04 AM
My opinion - the forced rhyming takes away from the emotion of the poem. Turning it into free verse might work better (keeping most of the words).