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thatchedroof1
Dec 21, 2008, 09:20 AM
What is the correct grammar for this sentence? Kristyn and her husband Jeremy Dougherty gave birth to twins on Dec 16, 2008 at 11 am.
N0help4u
Dec 21, 2008, 09:28 AM
I like an idea like this
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KBC
Dec 21, 2008, 09:34 AM
Maybe...
"Jeremy and Kristen Dougherty had twins born on Dec 16,2008 at 11 am."
Or switch the first names depending on preference.
GGertie
Nov 6, 2010, 12:05 PM
It would be more appropriate to say, "Kristyn and Jeremy Dougherty celebrate the birth of twins on Dec...." or "Kristyn and Jeremy Dougherty welcome twins born Dec 16, 2008."