jsosad14
Dec 6, 2008, 09:26 PM
Hey everyone, I am an ametauer poet and was wondering if this poem about a girl I like was any good. Please, any advice, likes or dislikes about it is needed.
Angela
My latin fire, girl that i desire
Your big brown eyes full of care
The light that makes my darkness dissapear
When i'm with you, there's always a rush
But always feeling that you might crush
My heart that has been scarred
Loving you could be very hard
But i'm willing to take a chance
Of hopingly finding romance
Because your're the girl of my dreams
We belong together it seem
Angela
My latin fire, girl that i desire
Your big brown eyes full of care
The light that makes my darkness dissapear
When i'm with you, there's always a rush
But always feeling that you might crush
My heart that has been scarred
Loving you could be very hard
But i'm willing to take a chance
Of hopingly finding romance
Because your're the girl of my dreams
We belong together it seem