Heyy
Can any one help me write a song I want to write one for my mom but I'm not very good please help me

Sam
Xx:confused:

Hi, ArticMonkey!

Thanks for posting something here as I suggested on the other thread. I will be back on later tonight in around three hours. I'm not home on my own computer.

To start the lyrics of the song, please just post here some ideas in words or sentences about how you feel about your mom, like maybe things that you like about her and why you are writing the song.

The thoughts don't necessarily have to be in any order - just random ideas, sentences and single words by themselves are even okay. Then, we can go from there to develop the song.

Just let your ideas flow and please don't get caught up that everything might need to be perfect right off the bat.

Okay? :)

Thanks!

I'll be around here on Friday night Sam, in case you would like to work on something. I am looking forward to working with you on your song!

Thanks
Do writing songs just start with writing sayings or a coupple of words that have been made up ?

I can sing other artists songs fine but I just can never come up with one of my own

Why do you call?
Why do you stare?
Why do you tell me to beware?
Why do you hug?
Why do you kiss?
Why do you always miss?
Is it because you love me?
Or is it because you don't?
Or is it because you won't?

Why do you call?
Why do you stare?
Why do you tell me to beware?
Why do you hug?
Why do you kiss?
Why do you always miss?
Is it because you love me?
Or is it because you don't?
Or is it beacuse you won't?

Hi, Sam!

I'm here right now. Are those questions above the ideas for your song? Also, why are you wanting to write the song?

Knowing the answer to especially the second question will help me to know which direction we need to go here.

You already appear to have a good knack for forming some kind of structure with what you write.

Thanks!

OK I love writing poetry and that's justa poem I wrote but I want to write songs because music is the only way to express myself and I want to no what it feels like to have everyone on who you are

No that's a poem and I was wanting to put it in to a song OK forget about the one for mom I can do that later but I just want to make a song and have music and be able to name something as mine insteed of singing some one else's work it gets kind of boring like I want my own label

OK i love writing poetry and that's justa poem i wrote but i want to write songs because music is the only way to express myself and i want to no what it feels like to have everyone on who you are

You can have a lot of people know who you are by the poetry that you write and not just by doing music.

Writing poetry is an art and something that takes practice in order to get really good at it. You already use it as a form of self-expression. You also have a good start at doing it. I know that you could be really good if you practiced it more and learned how to do it better!

Do you have a school newspaper?

Thanks!

No I don't really wirte anymore it kind of bores me so I sing insteed

no thats a poem and i was wanting to put it in to a song ok forget about the one for mom i can do that later but i just want to make a song and have music and be able to name something as mine insteed of singing some one elses work it gets kind of boring like i want my own label

Okay, then let's just work on writing a song. I'll re-write your poem in such a way that it would work well set to a rhythm and also meter.

No we don't have a school newspapper
I don't really write poetry anymore it's a little boring
I sing to keep myself entertained insteed
I'm getting tierd of sing other peoples music and want to sing my own if you no what I mean

OK how would you do that though?

ok how would you do that though?

It's not all that hard, once you know how to do it. The re-write of your poem into a song will be in my next post. Please be sure to answer any questions directly that I ask so that I can help you the best.

Thanks!

Why do you call and why do you stare, and why do you tell me to beware?

Why do you hug and why do you kiss, and why do you always seem to miss?

Is this because you love me, or because you don't, or maybe because you won't?

What do you think? It would work, musically.

The above would be a good first verse for your song. Any idea as to what you would like to be the title of your song? My initial thought for a title would be, "Do You Really Love Me?"

Also, is this song about someone that you like, or just some random thoughts that you have and wanted to make into a poem?

Thanks!

Heyy are you still there?

Yea it I like that name and its just some ranodm stuff
I like the re write to thanks

I just had a thought about your school not having a newspaper, a lot schools have them and they aren't all that hard to do and because having such a thing will help the students to learn in various ways, I'm sure that teachers and administration would be supportive of that kind of thing.

If you and bunch of your friends from school got together and talked together about how it would be a good thing to have a newspaper and then spoke with some teachers and also the principal, having a school news paper once a month or even once a week might become a reality!

Students could become reporters covering and writing articles about school events, writers of opinions about things, writers of things like opinions, essays, poems and also the lyrics to songs, photographers, etc.

Having copies of a school newspaper would also become a cherished keepsake in time. It's kind of also like having a yearbook.

If you become a student staff person on a school newspaper, that's something that you could also add to your resume someday so that you might have a better chance at getting a job because a potential employer will see that you not only did the school work that you were supposed to do, but were willing to do something extra outside of the usual school day.

Ill ask the teachers but I won't be going to the school much longer as I am getting a full time job

heyy are you still there?

Yes, I'm still here. I just wrote you a pretty long post and it took me a little while to compose it. You do have my attention here and I do want to help you!

I'm tierd of looking in the mirror and only seeing me when your right next to me
I'm tierd of waiting for your calls the times you said you would call and you didn't
I'm tierd of waiting for you to pull me out of the water so I don't drown
I'm tierd of running after you when you turn your back

Clough Why do you call and why do you stare, and why do you tell me to beware?

Why do you hug and why do you kiss, and why do you always seem to miss?

Is this because you love me, or because you don't, or maybe because you won't?


Clough What do you think? It would work, musically.

The above would be a good first verse for your song. Any idea as to what you would like to be the title of your song? My initial thought for a title would be, "Do You Really Love Me?"

Also, is this song about someone that you like, or just some random thoughts that you have and wanted to make into a poem?

Thanks!


ArticMonky yea it I like that name and its just some ranodm stuff
I like the re write to thanks

Since this thread went on to another page, I decided to quote some things from previous posts so that the thread would be easier to follow and read.

How about us working on a chorus for your song?

It might begin something like the following:

Do you really love me, and do you really care...

If you'd like to do this, would you please write something to continue the chorus? You can always change anything that I've written. I'm just trying to give you some ideas and tips. It is your song and need to reflect how you think and feel.

Thanks!

im tierd of looking in the mirror and only seeing me when your right next to me
im tierd of waiting for your calls the times you said you would call and you didnt
im tierd of waiting for you to pull me out of the water so i dont drown
im tierd of running after you when u turn your back

Is the above the second verse for your song? Please let me know.

Thanks!

Umm ill work on it to night I have to go now have a good evening thank you
Xx
Sam

I guess I'm not quiet sure if it would fitt any way I have to goo good bye

Do you have school tomorrow?

Okay, I can see that you're no longer online here. So, I do wish you a goodnight and pleasant dreams!

If what is below what you intended for the second verse, then there is a re-write of that below it. Musically, it will fit better with your first verse.


ArticMonkey I'm tierd of looking in the mirror and only seeing me when your right next to me
I'm tierd of waiting for your calls the times you said you would call and you didn't
I'm tierd of waiting for you to pull me out of the water so I don't drown
I'm tierd of running after you when you turn your back

Tired of looking in the mirror, only seeing me there, 'specially when you're right here beside me.

Tired of waiting for your calls, when you said you'd call, 'specially when you said you would.

Tired of waiting for you, to help me out of water, so that I might not drown.

I also dropped the last sentence so that the stanza would be better to match the first verse.

Things are developing here and you're doing a good job! Please keep trying!

I would like for you to check out the virtual keyboard that' on the following site. VIRTUAL KEYBOARD - PIANO (http://www.bgfl.org/bgfl/custom/resources_ftp/client_ftp/ks2/music/piano/index.htm)

When we're on here at the same time sometime, I can show you how to play your song.

Thanks!

Chorus
Do you really love me
Do you really miss me
Or is this just a dream I'm living?
If not won't you send someone to wake me from my night mares

v3

Can you see I'm stronger now
I've made myself move on
I won't keep running back
I'm now justa stranger on the street
I won't let you pull me down any longer

v4
So don't cry when you wake
Cause I won't be there to comfort you
Cause I have gone I have moved on now babe




How's this?

Hi, ArticMonkey!

Thanks for doing so much additional work!

Please give me a some time to look at and work on what you have added.

Looks like you have some great ideas!

What did you think of my revision to verse #2, please?

Thanks!

Yea I like it

ill ask the teachers but i wont be going to the school much longer as i am getting a full time job

I don't know where you're located, and I don't need to know that. However, don't you need to be in school until a certain age where you are located?

Thanks!

I'm in [edited]

Sam, because of your age, I needed to remove your location from your post in order to protect your privacy. I would hate to have someone who you didn't want to contact you, try to contact you, because of knowing your location and because of information they already might find out about you because of your being on this site.

Thank you for your understanding.

I would still appreciate knowing if you are required to be in school until a certain age.

I'm also working on your song right now.

Thanks!

Yea until your 16 I'm leavn next year to get a full time job

yea until your 16 im leavn next year to get a full time job

Thanks! Do you live with both your parents, and if not, what is the relationship of the person or persons to you with whom you are living, please?

I'm done with the revision and compilation of your song and will be posting it shortly. It's not perfect and will most likely take some additional work.

Thanks!

Below, is your song with the suggested revisions. Please let me know what you think. Thanks!

Verse 1
Why do you call and why do you stare, and why do you tell me to beware?
Why do you hug and why do you kiss, and why do you always seem to miss?
Is this because you love me, or because you don't, or maybe because you won't?

Verse 2
Tired of looking in the mirror, only seeing me there, 'specially when you're right here beside me.
Tired of waiting for your calls, when you said you'd call, 'specially when you said you would.
Tired of waiting for you, to help me out of water, so that I might not drown.

Verse 3
Can you see I'm stronger now
I've made myself move on
I won't keep running back
I'm now justa stranger on the street
I won't let you pull me down any longer

Verse 3 Revision - Please let me know what you think.
Can't you see I'm stonger and made myself move on? I won't keep running back...
To you I'm just a stranger now, walking down the street, I won't let you pull me down any longer.
(Needs one more part here to complete it.)

Verse 4
So don't cry when you wake
Cause I won't be there to comfort you
Cause I have gone I have moved on now babe

Verse 4 Revision - Please let me know what you think.
So, don't cry when you wake, and I'm not around, 'cause I won't be there for you anymore
I have moved on now, a thing I had to do, but still don't really know inside of me.
It's a choice I've made, because I never know if or whether you really care. (to chorus)

Chorus
Do you really love me
Do you really miss me
Or is this just a dream I'm living?
If not won't you send someone to wake me from my night mares

Chorus - Revision - Please let me know what you think.
Do you really love me and do you really miss me? Or, am I living just a dream?
If it's not a dream, but to me it seems it is, would you send someone to wake me from my nightmares?

I live with my dad and his evil wife

i live with my dad and his evil wife

It sounds like there are more things that need to be discussed here, Sam! Please know that I and others here really care about you. If needed, depending on how things go here, I will call in others to this thread who will be able to give you excellent advice concerning anything that might be troubling you. You are safe here, and much safer than you might be on many other sites!

I take it that his wife isn't your real mom. Is that true?

Yea that's true and thanks for the support but I'm OK and I like working with you I have me mates and some adult mates that I can go to but thanks for the concern

What is your name?

Sam, I forgot to include your chorus as you had originally written it, in my post #37 above. I have now added it.

what is your name?

It's Craig.

In your verse #4, you mention babe. Does that mean that this song is about a guy writing about a girl?

Thanks!

Yea it is

I like that name :)

yea thats true and thanks for the support but im ok and i like working with you i have me mates and some adult mates that i can go to but thanks for the concern

Thanks, that's fair. I just wanted to make sure that you were getting the emotional and mental support that you need. I'm glad that you are. I like working with you, too!

Yay I feel spechial lol any way soz abouot my spelling I have problems when it comes to spelling

yay i feel spechial lol any way soz abouot my spelling i have problems when it comes to spelling

Your spelling could be improved, and I'm trying to help you with the placement of your words for your song. Sometimes for songs and/or poetry, it's okay to break some of the normal rules for punctuation and spelling as well as grammar. Have you tried using the Spell Check at the bottom of the rectangle where you answer questions?

Because of the site upgrade, it hasn't been working. I like to use the one at the top right of the rectangle that has the little ABC above it. It works great! Have never had a problem with it. I think that if you click on it, that you will have to download it and it will also be integrated into the browser that you normally use.

Thanks any way I have to go now I will be back on around tomorrow same time

Xx
Thanks love
Sam

yea it is

i like that name :)

Thanks! If you're a girl, is your name really Sam? I understand if you have to go. It's all right!

I'll be back tomorrow also, and looking forward to further developing the song that you are wanting to write. So far, it seems to be going pretty well.

I'm not sure exactly what time though, because I have to lead a very large number of men in a Guest Night for one of the local barbershop choruses that I direct. We usually go out and have something that's called an "afterglow" after those kinds of events. Usually we go to an restaurant type of place.

If you have checked out the site that has the Virtual Keyboard on it, I would appreciate knowing what you think about it. Using it in the development of this thread as well as in the development of your song could really come in handy!

Thanks!

Yes I am a girl and my name is samantha elizabeth but sam for short

Yea I saw the keybord its cool

Looks like I just missed you, Sam! I am on now. Just got back home a little while ago.

Heyy I'm still on

It looked like you had logged off. I'm going to enable you to see that I'm also online now.

No I hadn't lol I had just closed the browser

Thanks! So, that's why the site wasn't "seeing" you anymore as being online here.

I think that I asked you on your other thread something about how much piano you do know how to play. Would you please tell me a little bit about what you do know how to play, please? Knowing that will help me to help you the best concerning your song becoming a song that is set to music!

Thanks!

I can play beginer piano I used to play I played for about 4 months

Can you play harmonically, three-note chords in your left hand and at the same time play a melody with your right hand?

Yea

Thanks! What are the notes that are in a "C" chord, please?

Umm I don't no chords :S I'm not that's good any more accuaily I suck my teacher can play

If I asked you to play a C, E and G all at exactly the same time with your left hand, would you be able to do it?

Yea

Thanks! If I asked you to play the song, "Mary Had a Little Lamb" starting with the middle finger of your right hand, on the "E" above middle "C" and without using any music, would you be able to play that song?

C, E and G are the notes that the "C" chord, is composed of by the way, just so you know. That is one of the chords that we could use in your song.

Um probably not
But when I learn sonething I can play it for life I'm a fast learner

I can play the c chord than do you have most of the music for it ?

um probly not
but when i learn sonething i can play it for life im a fast learner

I believe you when you say that you are a fast learner!

Do you know the song "Mary Had a Little Lamb?" I'm just trying to figure out how well you can play so that you will be able to play your song, after we finalize what the writing of the words to it is going to be.

Yea I no the song but not very well I neva gew up with child's songs I gew up with hard core songs

B bflat b bflat b f a g e

I can play that

i can play the c chord than do you have most of the music for it ?

If you mean the music for your song that might be written out, no, not on paper. But, the sound of the music for it comes to me immediately when I see the words that can be put to music. It can be put to actual, printed music later. Writing a song is a process that can sometimes take quite a bit of time.

Your song will take at least a few more, different chords in order for it to sound the best. If you can play the "C" chord, then that's a good start!

What I'm trying to get to here, in the immediate future, is for you to be able to play, at least a little bit of your song using that Virtual Keyboard that I showed to you.

Yea
Like I'm going to start learning piano soon at school

yea i no the song but not very well i neva gew up with childs songs i gew up with hard core songs

If you at least know the song a little bit, I would like for you to open up another browser in addition to this one, if you would, please?

You can play "Mary Had a Little Lamb" right away! I will show you how to do that!

OK done

Please open up the following link in the other browser.

VIRTUAL KEYBOARD - PIANO (http://www.bgfl.org/bgfl/custom/resources_ftp/client_ftp/ks2/music/piano/index.htm)

Done

All the notes that we are going to use for "Mary Had a Little Lamb" will be between the two C's on the keyboard.

Below, are the notes to "Mary Had a Little Lamb", first verse. Please play it and let me know how it goes.

E, D, C, D, E, E, E,
D, D, D, E, G, G,
E, D, C, D, E, E, E, E,
D, D, E, D, C

The words to those same notes are as follows:

Mary had a little lamb,
Little lamb, little lamb.
Mary had a little lamb,
It's fleece was white as snow.

Yea I done it that was easy

Good! Do you have a piano or music keyboard of some kind at home?

No but I do at skewl

no but i do at skewl

Please do check your spelling, Sam! Skewl is correctly spelled, school.

Your objective here as well as mine, is for you to learn how to write a song. You've already mentioned something about your spelling in another post. So, we might as well learn something else while we are doing the thing that this post is originally about. Wouldn't you agree?

If the current Spell Check at the bottom of the posting rectangle where you post doesn't work, you can use the one at the top right of the posting rectangle that has the ABC above it. You will need to download it, though. It's perfectly safe. I downloaded it and use it all of the time.

I make mistakes in my spelling all of the time. Checking the spelling really helps me! There are still some words that I have trouble spelling, even though I check spelling on a regular basis.

If you're around Sam, would you please move your mouse to this site? You can play at least part of your song by using the Virtual Keyboard. It won't be hard. I will show you how to do it.

Thanks!

Hi,

Just a simple advice... listen to what your heart says.. from there you can begin writing simple words. You have to be in the mood too before you could do it and of course inspired by someone.. happy thoughts could help you write good lyrics, it does not matter whether they rhyme or not. Again listen to your heart that is where true words come from.
summerskye08

hi,

Just a simple advice... listen to what your heart says.. from there you can begin writing simple words. you have to be in the mood too before you could do it and of course inspired by someone.. happy thoughts could help you write good lyrics, it does not matter whether they rhyme or not. Again listen to your heart that is where true words come from.
summerskye08

Hi, summerskye08!

Those are good thoughts that you have! I also hope that you read through the posts from the beginning of this thread that has now gone on for nine pages. Sam's really quite good at coming up with the creative words and ideas to use concerning her thoughts!

Thanks!

Hello are you there can u teach me please

Hello to you too, Sam!

Yes, I'm here. Please give me a few minutes to put notes to the words so that you can play a little of your song. Please open another browser so that you have the keyboard also.

Thanks!

Here are the notes to the first line of your song that go along with the words. Where there is an underscore (_) beside a note, that's where you will hold the note a little longer.

You might think of the rhythm as going something like this: 1234_and 1234_and1234_3212_

E E E E_ C D D D D_ D E E E G_ F E D E_
Why do you call and why do you stare, and why do you tell me to beware?

Please let me know how it goes using the keyboard. Thanks!

OK

Okay, the notes aren't quite spaced correctly above the notes. I'm not sure that I can fix that, but will work on it. It looked okay when I was writing it.

Yea it sound good any way I have to go talk to you tamoz good night xoxo love sammy

Here it is, fixed up a little bit better so that you can understand where the notes go above the words.

E----E---E---E_-C---D---D---D--D_---D----E---E--E--G_--F--E--D-E_
Why do you call and why do you stare, and why do you tell me to beware?

yea it sound good any way i have to go talk to you tamoz good night xoxo love sammy

Okay, I do understand. We'll connect later then...

Thanks!

Hi, Sam!

If you're there, would you please move your mouse?

Thanks!

Heyy I'm here soz I haven't been on for a while I'm on now

Hi, Sam!

I wish that I'd have been able to be on here earlier when you were on! Hopefully, we will be on at the same time sometime soon!

I hope that you are well!

Thanks!

Yes I'm well but dads not lol tummy bug

Hi, Sam!

I'm here right now. Just logged onto the site. I'm sorry your dad's not feeling well. Does he have the flu?

Thanks!

Yea its cool any way how far did you get with the music?

I was waiting for you to return and us to be on at the same time. I'd rather work on it when you are here, it would work much better that way because then I wouldn't have to do a bunch of work and then maybe you not really liking what I did. It's best to take things in the song one verse at a time...

Were you able to play on the virtual keyboard what I have already written and did it make sense to you?

Thanks!

Yer I did um it made a lot of scence can you send the key bored again

Hi, Sam!

Below is the link to how to get to the keyboard again.

VIRTUAL KEYBOARD - PIANO (http://www.bgfl.org/bgfl/custom/resources_ftp/client_ftp/ks2/music/piano/index.htm)

Are you able to sing along with what you play? I'm glad that it's making sense to you!

I'm usually on about the time that you were on when posting what you did above. I will be on about that same time on most nights for me. However, I couldn't be on then because I had to do a lot of practicing on the piano.

I'll work on getting you some additional things to play for your song that you are writing.

Later...

You should first have a main topic. You're mom then think of the words or things you want to tell her then from those words you could make and then think of a tune:)

you should first have a main topic. you're mom then think of the words or things you want to tell her then from those words you could make and then think of a tune:)

Hi, celina mae!

Those are definitely good ideas that you have! You also might want to check out how her song that she is writing has been developed so far by clicking on other pages of this thread.

Thanks!

Hi, Sam!

I do hope that you will return to here. Below, are some additional notes added to the ones that we've already composed, so that you can play and sing more of your song.

E----E--E---E__C---D---D--D---D____D---E---E--E---G__F---E--D-E___
Why do you call and why do you stare, and why do you tell me to beware?

E----E--E---E__C---D---D--D---D____D---E---E--E--G__F---E----D-E___
Why do you hug and why do you kiss, and why do you always seem to miss?

C-C---C__F____A__G___E__C--C-C------C--F_A__G____C-C-C------C--D_E__C__
Is this because you love me, or because you really don't, or because you really won't?

It is very simple!I wrote a song to my mom for her b-day one time all you have to do is find a phrase or a word anything like that and in my head things start poping up again that I can put in their use your feelings it is really simple once you get started just relax and be calm and it all will come to you I love to write songs good luck

Hey thanks sorry I haven't been on I've been very sick any way I'm still sick but I'm getting better

it is very simple!i wrote a song to my mom for her b-day one time all you have to do is find a phrase or a word anything like that and in my head things start poping up again that i can put in their use ur feelings it is really simple once u get started just relax and be calm and it all will come to u i love to write songs good luck

Hi, ibabysit!

Did you put your song to actual music?

Thanks!

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hey thanks sorry i havent been on iv been very sick any way im still sick but im getting better

Hey, that's okay! I'm sorry that you've been very sick! :( Would you mind sharing what it was that you were sick with? I'm glad that you're getting better! :)

Thanks!

Okay Sam, I can see that you're not logged on here anymore right now. I have to go.

I hope that you feel all better in a short time!

Please do practice playing and singing what we've written so far and let me know what you think, okay?

Thanks!

Its cool I'm finding it hard to play but ill get it and yer just ad something wrng with my overys and I keept barfing :L lol gross I no

Hey, Sam!

Here's the first part of your song actually set to music! Maybe you or one of your friends could play it!

Omg thank you

Hi, Sam!

You're welcome! I hope that what I posted is helpful to you!

I do have a fancier one that I wrote for you. Am trying to find a way so that you can actually hear the music on this site. Not sure how to do that yet. Am doing some investigating...

Thanks!

Thanks for all you have done I really apprshiate it

That's no problem and my pleasure, Sam!

Were you able to play what I wrote?

Thanks!

Dear Sam,

Below are a couple of images of the fancier version of the first part of your song that I wrote for you. I do hope that you're able to play it! If not, then someone who is really good at the piano should be able to do that. I needed to make it two images because adding the extra notes in the left hand made it a lot bigger.

Thanks!

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Um no I wasn't but my teacher is teching it to me thanks

That's great that your teacher is teaching you how to play it! The first version isn't all that hard at all.

We can work on more, if you would like to.

I do hope that you're feeling better! :)

Thanks!

Hi, Sam!

Here's another version for the first part of your song, in case you might like to try it! :)

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I'm concerned about you Sam and hope that you're okay! Haven't seen you around here in a number of days.

Sorry have been working on a proformance at school I have to sing at a assembily on Friday so I've been very bussy I'm singing unforgettable by dean geyer and caitlin stasey

Thanks for letting me know what was going on with you, Sam! I appreciate it! That's cool that you're going to be singing in an assembly at school! I'll look forward to hearing about how that goes!

I'm not singing I can't my dads mate just went in hospital and it hitting me hard hje had a heart attact he's like my other dad and I don't no what to do I don't want to lose him I love him too much

I do understand how you feel, Sam! It's really hard to do something that is from yourself and means a lot to you when someone dear to you is hurting!

What you might consider doing is hoping and praying for the best for your dad's mate, Sam! I hope and pray for the best for you!

Thanks he is getting better now to

Hey, Sam!

I'm glad that your dad's mate is getting better! To keep you in good spirits, keep your hope up and to give you something else to practice, here's some written music to the second verse of your song. It's different than the first verse.

Here were the words:

Verse 2
Tired of looking in the mirror, only seeing me there, 'specially when you're right here beside me.
Tired of waiting for your calls, when you said you'd call, 'specially when you said you would.
Tired of waiting for you, to help me out of the water, so that I might not drown.

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You know what, Sam? If you wanted to write the words to a song about the way that you've been feeling about things right now, we could do that! If it's in a minor key, it could really be something beautiful!

We can always keep working on your other song.

Please let me know.

Thanks!

Are you okay, Sam? I haven't seen you around here for a number of days and just wanted to know if you're okay.

Thanks!

Yer I'm OK sorry have been preoccupyed with mates and guys lol I'm kind of sort of giving up in singing atm any ways cya and thanks for every thing loves

Sammy

Thanks, Sam!

I really enjoyed working on this project with you! I'm also glad that you're occupied with some things where you'll have fun and feel good about yourself!

Please let me know if you would like do any work as far as continuing to write and play music, as I would be glad to help you!

I wish for you only the best! :)

Thanks!

I am accualy writing a story atm and yer I love writing I'm ready the twilight series atm by stephenie meyer

Cyaz xox
Bye
Loves sammyantha

Who knows? You could be famous someday by what you write, Sammy!

I am glad that your spirits are higher now and that you're doing positive thing and feeling better about yourself!

Are you still practicing the piano?

Thanks!

Yer I'm practising a song called Bella's Lullaby - River Flows In You - Yiruma

Thanks for the update, Sammy! Please do keep me posted about what's happening and whether you'd like to write a song of any kind or not here. I'd love to help you!

Thanks!

Hey, Sam!

I haven't seen you around here in a very long time! I hope that you're doing really well!

I just wanted to let you know that I finally found a way for you to here the music for your song the way that I hear it! You can hear it by clicking on the following link! It's the more complicated version of the music.


Sam's Song - More Complicated.wav (http://www.snapdrive.net/files/595417/Sam%27s%20Song%20-%20More%20Complicated.wav)

Thanks!

Omg thanks lol I haven't been on in a long time I'm now in new zealand with my mom

Sounds good.

You're welcome, Sam! I'm glad that you liked it!

If you would like to continue with writing your song, I would be glad to help you! Since it would be a lot easier now that you can hear what is composed shortly after it's written.

Or, if you would like to write something new to which you might want to have set to music, we could do that too!

Please let me know...

I hope that things are okay with your family!

Are they?

Thanks!

Yer my familys fine and so am I its my 16th birthday tomorrow did you no so I won't be on at all
Cyaaz

Thanks so much

HAPPY BIRTHDAY, SAM!!!!

:p :D :)

Thanks omg I brought a kitten his name is nightmare he is 11 years old and is blacky gray I brought him for 15 dollars

If Nightmare is 11 years old, then he's not a kitten, but a cat!
But, there's really nothing wrong in thinking of him being a "kitten" in your eyes.

Would you like to write a song about your cat? Nightmare would be a great subject for a song!

I hope that he's a good cat and that you had a great birthday! :)

accualy hes not 11 years old hes 11 weeks old lol
and i changed his name to fang from the cartoon mona the vampire lol

http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm29/sexy-pupp/Picture-1.jpg


This is fang

Cute kitten, Sam! :)

:>:p

accualy hes not 11 years old hes 11 weeks old lol
and i changed his name to fang from the cartoon mona the vampire lol
Well he's not a kitten any more

Your a wonderful mother
Your always there
How can I not love you
When your always there?
I love seeing you happy
I wish you always be
I truly love that
Don't u see?

I wish u like it

Your a wonderful mother
Your always there
How can I not love you
When your always CARE
I love seeing you happy
I wish you always be
I truly love that
Don't u see?

Thank you

Cute kitten, Sam!! :)

Well he is no longer a kitten and here's a pik of what he looks like now

Anytime

:)
Its good I have to say that but this is an old thread and I already wrote her a song but thanks for it anyway

Thanks for posting the pic of your cat, Sam! That's really some green eyes there! I hope that you're doing well!

I've been having some medical issues that have required hospitalization and rest. So, I haven't been on this site as much as I normally would.

Hi too, nothing lasts!

If you would like to develop any lyrics that you've written into music that you can hear, I would love to help you to do that! We would need to do that by you starting a separate thread, though.

Thanks!

How come you were in hospital what happened

I damaged my neck with a very difficult paint job on a ceiling. The damage has affected much of what I'm able to do or not to do. Thanks for asking! :)

Hi, willie

Thanks for posting something here as I suggested on the other thread. I will be back on later tonight in around three hours. I'm not home on my own computer.

To start the lyrics of the song, please just post here some ideas in words or sentences about how you feel about your mom, like maybe things that you like about her and why you are writing the song.

The thoughts don't necessarily have to be in any order - just random ideas, sentences and single words by themselves are even okay. Then, we can go from there to develop the song.

Just let your ideas flow and please don't get caught up that everything might need to be perfect right off the bat.

Okay? :)

Thanks! I love my mom she is the best mom in the hold world when I was born I was so so happy come in to this word in I so very to have a mom like her she is the best mom in the hold world today hey that I every so in she help her kids make dream come ture now I'm 19 doing everything I could do for her in make her live the life that she can if it not was for god I will never have a great mom like her

how come you were in hospital what happened

Hi Sam!

I'm sorry that this is now old!

I messed up my neck with a paint job on a ceiling that I did. That's how I wound up in the hospital. What was wrong with me physically, is complicated... Nothing major. Result was that I was having a major panic attack.

Thanks!

i love my mom she is the best mom in the hold world when i was born i was so so happy come in to this word in i so very to have a mom like her she is the best mom in the hold world today hey that i every so in she help her kids make dream come ture now im 19 doing everything i could do for her in make her live the life that she can if it not was for god i will never have a great mom like her

Hi, williecoleman19!

So, would you like to start a thread about a song that you might like to write?

Thanks!

Hi, Sam!

Are you okay? Haven't seen you around here in a really long time.

It's because of you that I learned how to play Bella's Lullaby!

Thanks!

Hey I was wondering could you write me a song, PLEASE?