I'm 11 years old so what do you thinks good and wha should I improve

Watch

Watch me and listen and you'll be surprised
Lets just say I can spit and I should be advertised
Why ? Because I'm that prized
How can you not notice me ? I'm undisguised
So, all my peers open your eyes and ears
Everything that I say’s going to be quite clear
Also one more thing, please hold the cheers
Cuz when its over, your going to wish you listned better
Cuz I'm equivalent to a 4 leaf clover
Im that rare
You should care, I'm as important as air
Plus you’ll never hear something greater
Cuz no one can compare




Watch as I get older and my rhymes get colder
Everyone will honor me as if I as a soldier
Watch, one day ill hit the big screen,my
Wallet will be like grass but more green.

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Wiseee

Hey,
this is great!! I think it's really and that as you get older, you'll get better and better!

Cool :)

Very good for your age.the 1 thing I would advise you on is try not have the ending on everyline rhyme.even have line 1s ending word rhyming with line 3 and 2 with 4 and so on.I hope this helps.