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    Oct 7, 2016, 08:49 PM
    Can't come up with a good title for story?
    So in school we have to write a story and I made this creepy story since its getting close to Halloween. In the story there's a woman who seems just romantically interested in this guy, but then she starts stalking him. When she is stalking him it is also revealed that she can do several things just by snapping her fingers. Then after a month of stalking him she alters her appearance by snapping her fingers again so she looks like the perfect lady for the guy. Then she approaches him and asks him out. He says yes and after a month of dating they become a couple. Finally one night she invites him over for a special night together and when she invites him into the bedroom she snaps her fingers and kills him. Then she stuffs him in a box and puts him in the basement with all the others so they can be together forever. I know the story might sound boring or corny but if you could read the whole thing in detail you'd probably be more impressed. I would write the whole story here but it would be way too long. Its 3 pages long... I've tried: the perfect man, soulmates and together for titles but they just aren't working for me. I need some ideas quickly as this story will be due next week.
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    Oct 7, 2016, 09:16 PM
    Something about finger snapping, a play on words maybe. "All It Takes Is ...."
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    Oct 7, 2016, 09:24 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    Something about finger snapping, a play on words maybe. "All It Takes Is ...."
    Thanks so much, I feel more inspired and have a few other ideas now, thanks again! :)
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    Oct 8, 2016, 12:34 AM
    I can think of a couple of approaches to the title, which you choose would depend on what you emphasize in the actual story. If you spend a lot of wordage on the boxes in the basement then something about 'He's a keeper' or 'I think I'll keep this one' might work. If you emphasize the finger-snapping more, Wondergirl's ideas might do better.

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