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Old Apr 17, 2007, 06:30 PM
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My poem about my boyfriend :P


My hot sexy Beast Troy,
I love you an your boy.
You are the key to my heart,
Which I hope never falls apart.
You are my best friend,
Who no-matter what I'll defend.
You make me stronge when I am weak,
By your sweet kisses on my cheek.
I hope our love never dies,
For if it does I'll be tramatized.
I know you hate all my questions,
But sorry my dear that is my proffession.
I wish you would talk more on the phone,
an not yell at me in such a harsh tone.
I wish you would talk to me more,
Cause talking to you is something I adore.
I wish you weren't always so mad,
cause everythime you are makes me sad.
I want you to be happy,
Not always feeling crappie.
Sorry I don't wanna make love all the time,
I've been working lots of overtime.
I've been overly tired an stressed,
Sometimes I feel like everythings a mess.
Like you will never get divorced,
That you hate me cause I don't always want intercoarse.
That you will never pay off your debt,
That I always make you upset.
That you still have feeling for your Xwife,
Any ou don't want me to be apart of your life.
I just can't always take the drama in our life,
That is usually cause by your Xwife.
All she wants to do is make you miserable,
Just cause she is so unstable.
An I think shes jelous of me,
Cause unlike her I actually make you happy.
But anyways enough with that SIut,
She can kiss my sexy hot butt.
I just want to get married already I can't wait anymore!
An don't worry I wont be like your last one, a Wh*re!
I will love you like no one has before.
I will be the best wife you have ever had,
I won't make you sad I'll make you glad.
I just want you to know I love you forever,
An ever,
An I would never.
Do anything to hurt you,
Cause that you've already been through.
If you read this an you love me too,
Then come give me a kiss so I know you do.


The end

I like to write stupid poems it makes me relaxe Even though my poems probably suck

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Old Apr 18, 2007, 12:46 AM   #2  
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If by writing these poems causes you to relax, then it is serving a positive purpose by you doing them. We all need to relax.

You poem is not stupid! It is a reflection of what you think of a part of your world right now. That, in itself, is a part of what art is about.

My suggestion would be to keeping practicing what you are doing concerning writing poetry. You are good at it, and will get better with practice.

Could lead to something that might influence the world someday.
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Old Apr 18, 2007, 02:40 AM   #3  
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I just want to get married already I can't wait anymore!
An don't worry I wont be like your last one, a Wh*re!

Brilliant, brilliant line! I wonder if Hallmark would put that in one of their cards?

Keep up the good work, I certainly enjoyed it!
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Old Apr 18, 2007, 07:28 AM   #4  
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lol thanks guys :P
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Seriously, I think we should put it forward to them, it's a winner!

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lol
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Old Sep 13, 2007, 01:25 AM   #7  
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Seriously, I think we should put it forward to them, it's a winner!


thats an awesome idea! lol. thats funny you really need to!
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