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Old Oct 31, 2007, 10:17 PM
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Let's write a story together!

Here is the first sentence. Please c/p the growing story and add your own sentence or two.

Jacob, a member of the nomad gang, "Radiation Angels," tore down the highway on his chrome and obsidian Harley.

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Old Nov 8, 2007, 06:10 PM   #2  
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I am a writer of poetry, not story, but thought I'd give it a shot. If it doesn't work, just skip my post...
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Jacob, a member of the nomad gang, "Radiation Angels," tore down the highway on his chrome and obsidian Harley.

This was not the first time Jacob had made this trip, however this time speed was of the essence.
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Jacob, a member of the nomad gang, "Radiation Angels," tore down the highway on his chrome and obsidian Harley.

This was not the first time Jacob had made this trip, however this time speed was of the essence.

His heart thummped and sweat drenched his jacket as he rode glancing cautiously around as he entered the worst part of city.
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Jacob, a member of the nomad gang, "Radiation Angels," tore down the highway on his chrome and obsidian Harley.

This was not the first time Jacob had made this trip, however this time speed was of the essence.

His heart thumped and sweat drenched his jacket as he rode glancing cautiously around as he entered the worst part of city.

This part of the city was the turf of one of their rival gangs, "Avengers of the Night."
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Jacob, a member of the nomad gang, "Radiation Angels," tore down the highway on his chrome and obsidian Harley.

This was not the first time Jacob had made this trip, however this time speed was of the essence.

His heart thumped and sweat drenched his jacket as he rode glancing cautiously around as he entered the worst part of city.

This part of the city was the turf of one of their rival gangs, "Avengers of the Night."

"Radiation Angels" and "Avengers of the Night" have been rivals since the time of Jacob's father. The true beginning of the rival is known to only a few select members of both gangs. Jacob is one of those few.
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Jacob, a member of the nomad gang, "Radiation Angels," tore down the highway on his chrome and obsidian Harley.

This was not the first time Jacob had made this trip, however this time speed was of the essence.

His heart thumped and sweat drenched his jacket as he rode glancing cautiously around as he entered the worst part of city.

This part of the city was the turf of one of their rival gangs, "Avengers of the Night."

"Radiation Angels" and "Avengers of the Night" have been rivals since the time of Jacob's father. The true beginning of the rival is known to only a few select members of both gangs. Jacob is one of those few.

Coming to this realization, Jacob decided to change direction and not ride through the Avengers turf.
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Jacob, a member of the nomad gang, "Radiation Angels," tore down the highway on his chrome and obsidian Harley.

This was not the first time Jacob had made this trip, however this time speed was of the essence.

His heart thumped and sweat drenched his jacket as he rode glancing cautiously around as he entered the worst part of city.

This part of the city was the turf of one of their rival gangs, "Avengers of the Night."

"Radiation Angels" and "Avengers of the Night" have been rivals since the time of Jacob's father. The true beginning of the rival is known to only a few select members of both gangs. Jacob is one of those few.

Coming to this realization, Jacob decided to change direction and not ride through the Avengers turf.
His phone had rang seconds before, he was too late for his mission. Instead the mission had come to his own turf...he quickly changed directions now fearing for the life of his friends.
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Jacob, a member of the nomad gang, "Radiation Angels," tore down the highway on his chrome and obsidian Harley.

This was not the first time Jacob had made this trip, however this time speed was of the essence.

His heart thumped and sweat drenched his jacket as he rode glancing cautiously around as he entered the worst part of city.

This part of the city was the turf of one of their rival gangs, "Avengers of the Night."

"Radiation Angels" and "Avengers of the Night" have been rivals since the time of Jacob's father. The true beginning of the rival is known to only a few select members of both gangs. Jacob is one of those few.

Coming to this realization, Jacob decided to change direction and not ride through the Avengers turf.
His phone had rang seconds before, he was too late for his mission. Instead the mission had come to his own turf...he quickly changed directions now fearing for the life of his friends.

As Jacob rode toward his destiny, he put aside his fears for his friends and strove to remember all that his father had taught him. The information that he could recall would mean the difference between life and death for the "Radiation Angels". Much had changed for the gang since the time of Jacob's father. Still Jacob knew that the knowledge, he possessed and the skills he had been taught by his father were timeless. Jacob leaned into the wind his mind now set on getting to his destination before...
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Jacob, a member of the nomad gang, "Radiation Angels," tore down the highway on his chrome and obsidian Harley.

This was not the first time Jacob had made this trip; however, this time speed was of the essence.

His heart thumped and sweat drenched his jacket as he rode, glancing cautiously around as he entered the worst part of the city.

"This part of the city" was the turf of one of their rival gangs, "Avengers of the Night."

"Radiation Angels" and "Avengers of the Night" had been rivals since the time of Jacob's father. The true beginning of the rivalry was known to only a few select members of both gangs. Jacob was one of those few.

Jacob decided to change direction and not ride through the Avengers turf. His phone had rung seconds before, and he was too late for his mission. Instead the mission had come to his own turf...he quickly changed direction now, fearing for the life of his friends.

As Jacob rode toward his destiny, he put aside his fears for his friends and strove to remember all that his father had taught him. The information that he could recall would mean the difference between life and death for the "Radiation Angels". Much had changed for the gang since the time of Jacob's father. Still Jacob knew that the knowledge he possessed and the skills he had been taught by his father were timeless. Jacob leaned into the wind, his mind now set on getting to his destination before any member of the rival gang noticed him.

A dog began barking and began to chase him, nipping at his left foot. He tried to swat the dog away, but it stayed with him. As he turned his head again to yell at the dog, Jacob didn't see what was looming right in front of him.

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Dear Wondergirl,

If you change the paragraph format, then it's hard to keep track of where we are.

Thank you!
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