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Old May 31, 2009, 03:53 PM
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I got flowers today.
What do you think of my poem? Please, I need help on whether its good enough to send into a competion.


I got flowers today.

I got flowers today.
It wasnt my birthday, or any other special day.
Last night, we had our first fight.
He yelled at me, and said some cruel things,
But I know he must be sorry,
Because he sent me flowers today.
I got flowers today.
It wasnt our annaversary, or any other special day.
Last night, he hit me.
But I know he must be sorry,
Because he sent me flowers today.
I got flowers today.
It wasnt mothers day, or any other special day.
Last night, he beat me again.
It was much worse than anytime before.
He shoved me into a wall, and choked me.
I cant leave him.
What about the kids?
What about money?
I got flowers today.
Today WAS a special day.
Today was the day of my funeral.
Last night, he finally beat me to death.
If only I had had the strength to leave him,
I would not have gotten flowers today.
-paige.


Im only fifteen. Please dont be harsh. I watched this happen with my mother. She was my inspiration.
 
     

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Old Jul 27, 2009, 03:38 PM   #11  
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I too love it!!! And, you will get flowers if you remain with the guy you are with. And he is only 13?

http://www.askmehelpdesk.com/dating/...ay-380156.html
 
 
     
 
 
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I too love it!!! And, you will get flowers if you remain with the guy you are with. And he is only 13?

http://www.askmehelpdesk.com/dating/...ay-380156.html
OMG! J, I posted this link on that link so she'd realize that's where she's heading.

I'm afraid now.
 
 
     
 
 
Old Nov 6, 2009, 02:55 AM   #13  
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wow paige, this poem is great! sounds like the poem that Paulette Kelly has a copyright on from back in 1992! I think if you do a search on google you will see it.. you might get in trouble if you submit someone else's work.. you might get in trouble..
 
 
     
 
 
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wow paige, this poem is great! sounds like the poem that Paulette Kelly has a copyright on from back in 1992! I think if you do a search on google you will see it.. you might get in trouble if you submit someone else's work.. you might get in trouble..
 
 
     
 
 
Old Nov 7, 2009, 04:50 PM   #15  
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its no one elses work. but thank you for your concern
 
 
     
 
 
Old Nov 7, 2009, 05:43 PM   #16  
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I Got Flowers
I Got Flowers Today - Domestic Violence Poem - 9 1/2 Couples: Life Love Intimacy - The Novel
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I got flowers today.

Ok just checking.. if you are 15 I dont think you were born in 1992 when it says it was copyrighted by Paulette..
 
 
     
 
 
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Poem is much too similar to copyrighted work.

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