I have a blog called The Success Spot at

http://a1successforce.blogspot.com

and was wondering if my writing is up to par. I am going for a more conversational tone, but also want to portray credibility, sincerity, and trust. My goal is to improve my weaknesses and improve my strengths. Any feedback is greatly appreciated.

Zayne S Halsall

If the last update on your blog (2006) is anything to go by, I would say you managed to successfully improve your weaknesses. Well done!