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Asked Apr 22, 2012, 08:21 PM � 3 Answers
We are told to rise above our thoughts to create inner space by ceasing the endless chatter in our minds and by practicing stillness. There are many ways to end the thoughts that constantly bounce around in our brains, but there is a difference between rising above our thoughts and falling below them. Watching television, drinking alcohol, or taking certain drugs may quiet our minds for a while, but Tolle warns us that they will ultimately cause us to lose consciousness and fall below thought.

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Apr 22, 2012, 08:26 PM


Which sentence and why? This is from your essay. Did your teacher say to edit this passage?
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Apr 22, 2012, 08:29 PM
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Which sentence and why? This is from your essay. Did your teacher say to edit this passage?
Acually, I can't understand what they say. Because te sentence is difficult for me, so I want to easy sentence.
Actually, I am a intenational studnet.

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Apr 22, 2012, 08:33 PM


What you posted was in your essay and was stolen (plagiarized) from someone's blog. I will not change it so it looks like you wrote it.
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