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Help to finish my song?

Asked Sep 29, 2010, 09:56 AM — 3 Answers

I'm writing this song but don't want to ruin the rest of it.
Any help is appreciated.
Thanks!:
Hello tree, how can you be

So tall and happy with all that you see

You got a nice view with your head in the clouds

If you see any changes

Please give me a shout

The rain is coming

Can you hear me now?

Everybody run inside

Indoor voices, don't scream and shout

You're all so funny, afraid to get wet

But don't you see I'm quite content

You ask why I'm happy

Well its simple you see

The birds sing best

After a downpour like this

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joypulv Posts: 11,972, Reputation: 9216

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Sep 29, 2010, 11:51 AM

I like it just the way it is.
Sing it to some people, adults and kids, to get a better feel than you'll get online.

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mjhyankees Posts: 1, Reputation: 1

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Apr 21, 2012, 02:29 PM

there's a website called www.finishyoursong.yolasite.com they do exactly what you're looking for.

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Redrocky100 Posts: 18, Reputation: 1

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Jul 9, 2012, 07:51 PM

i am no song writer but what about you add something about flowers...idk whatever youu like

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