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Dear Sir or Madam:

I would like to take this opportunity to introduce to you, the very first interactive community brand in the field hockey industry. MyRage.Biz is a unique paradigm shift from the conventional that brings the end-user/player as the initiator of the supply chain. The positive implications of involving the community from the outset are tremendous and have never before been fully utilized. By giving participation, control & incentive to people throughout the process, each event generates stories that become viral thanks to social networks both online and offline, attracting more interest and above all a sense of ownership for the people involved. To see this concept in action and how well this fits with field hockey, we welcome you to visit our website MyRage.Biz :: Field Hockey Evolution - Index

We launched MRB on 31st March 2009, 7 months down the line, we have a range of 21 sticks; out of which one is a special edition stick launched in association with the Dutch legend Karel Klaver, 100+ design submissions, approx. 600 active members on the website, 1640 fans on our Facebook page in just the last 3 months, a 3 page article in the 20th issue of PUSH Magazine UK praising MRB as the future, a successful sponsorship drive, tens of custom orders and many thumbs up from field hockey enthusiasts around the globe.

And that’s just the last 7 months! There is a lot more to come and we would like to invite you to explore the prospect of stocking and selling MRB sticks.

We have a motivated and experienced management team ensuring efficiency and quality of service. We are flexible in order quantities to suit your needs; with a fast turnaround time on bulk orders. We are confident in the quality of our products offering you complete after-sale support and a hassle-free warranty claim process.

As you will discover from our website and other resources, that we have come up with a novel business model and have been successful in engaging customers in a fascinating new way. We believe that we have something very unique to offer that would most certainly appeal to your customer base. If you would like to find out more or require samples etc., it would be my pleasure to assist you.

The following quick links will help you discover more about MRB:

*Our production sources
Our production sources | The MRB Blog

*Now you can offer your club customers the option of customized sticks keeping lucrative profit margins!
MyRage.Biz :: Field Hockey Evolution - Custom Designs

*Checkout our Facebook page for ongoing discussions and updates
MyRage.Biz :: Field Hockey Evolution | Facebook

If you have any questions or concerns, please do not hesitate to contact me. I or one of our representatives will contact you during the next 10 days to ensure that you have received our information and to address any outstanding issues.

Thank you very much for considering our request.

Sincerely,
JUAN MISRE
Marketing Executive
MyRage.Biz