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Old Nov 15, 2006, 06:25 AM
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Grammer-Paralllelism

I'm learning about parallelism and I could not identify the parallelism in the ff sentences:

1. One option the employees had was to take a cust in pay; the other was longer hours of work.

2. The refrigerator has a cracked vegetable drawer, one of the shelves is missing, and a strange freezer smell.

3. Jean spoke vididly and with force at the student government meeting.

4. Mike's letter of application was smudged, improperly spaced, and it had wrinkles.

I would be very grateful if you can help me identify the problems in the above sentences.

Thanks in advance.

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Old Dec 8, 2006, 08:37 AM   #2  
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I'm learning about parallelism and I could not identify the parallelism in the ff sentences:

1. One option the employees had was to take a cust in pay; the other was longer hours of work.

2. The refrigerator has a cracked vegetable drawer, one of the shelves is missing, and a strange freezer smell.

3. Jean spoke vididly and with force at the student government meeting.

4. Mike's letter of application was smudged, improperly spaced, and it had wrinkles.

I would be very grateful if you can help me identify the problems in the above sentences.

Thanks in advance.
The following are the likely corrections to the given questions.

1. One option the employees had was to take a cut in pay; the other was to work longer hours.
2. The refrigerator has a cracked vegetable drawer, one missing shelf, and a strangely smelling freezer.
3. Jean spoke vividly and forcibly at the student government meeting.
4. Mike's letter of application was smudged, improperly spaced, and wrinkled.

I hope this will help you friend,
with best wishes,
Ramanamlv
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