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| Originally Posted by prosty I'm learning about parallelism and I could not identify the parallelism in the ff sentences:
1. One option the employees had was to take a cust in pay; the other was longer hours of work.
2. The refrigerator has a cracked vegetable drawer, one of the shelves is missing, and a strange freezer smell.
3. Jean spoke vididly and with force at the student government meeting.
4. Mike's letter of application was smudged, improperly spaced, and it had wrinkles.
I would be very grateful if you can help me identify the problems in the above sentences.
Thanks in advance. |
The following are the likely corrections to the given questions.
1. One option the employees had was to take a cut in pay; the other was
to work longer hours.
2. The refrigerator has a cracked vegetable drawer, one missing shelf, and
a strangely smelling freezer.
3. Jean spoke vividly and
forcibly at the student government meeting.
4. Mike's letter of application was smudged, improperly spaced, and
wrinkled.
I hope this will help you friend,
with best wishes,
Ramanamlv