Hi guys, I have to do an essay about the everglades loss because of urban development and if this is bad for the future or not and the paragraph i put for the part of if its bad or not is the following:

This is incredibly terrible for the future of South Florida because more and more urban development is going to enlarge through the everglades and people are going to start using up all the water and resources that the everglades has provided for the animals and plants and it is going to come to a point where the animals and plants are going to start dying and as soon as you know it, the everglades will be gone.

I think i need a little fix up so if you guys can maybe give me tips or change something in it id really appreciate it.

Thanks!!!