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APPLICATION FOR HOUSING IN THE STAFF QUARTERS

Now that I am part of this institution's labour force and have been hired to be the fitness instructor in the...

I read your letter. To my way of thinking it is wordy and ponderous, and could be simplified and made more straightforward. Do I have your permission to edit it? Or does your institution like wordy...

Using all this information, please write your housing application letter, and I (and maybe others) will edit it and make further suggestions to improve it.

Now, using all the information we have worked out in this thread, please write up your very excellent application for housing. I'm signing off for the night, but will see in the morning if you posted...

And the time in between would be your free time when you don't have to be in the office? So it sounds like traveling from another location (home) would be difficult and stressful and might cause you...

And you have a split shift. What times would you have to be at the center?

Just between you and me, how would such an apartment benefit you, especially as pertains to your job as fitness instructor?