The goal for the paragraph is Sentence Focus: to use stronger verbs and subjects.



There is a misunderstanding of the wolf among most people. Contrary to popular belief, humans are never attacked. In reality, nature is served by the tracking down and elinminating of the weak nd sick animals of other species. altough a robbery of some prized chickens pf farmer will occasionally be committed, tendency is usually to stray far from man, prowling prairies and forests for his prey. Subsistense of these animals, in fact, is usually based on a diet of mice. While the general belief is also that that the silence of the night is fractured by the wolf's piercing cries, there is blame falling on the the wolf that is actually deserved by his cousin the coyote.