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Old Sep 1, 2007, 09:43 PM
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My Personal Interview
My personal interview is all about my classmate Judy Yuen. She is 46 years old. She came from Hong Kong, but she was born in Taiwan. 15 years ago she left in Hong Kong. She decided to settle down here in Alameda City, and loves it. According to her, it’s just liked her old hometown in Hong Kong. She also teaches a Chinese language class in Alameda almost 11 years now. Her hobbies are gardening and biking and also she loves artwork, traveling and camping. She has two sons, and they are both studying in the university colleges. At the same time she is studying in college too. She can understands and speak multilingual languages such as mandarin, cantoness, Fu jian and English. Her goal is to get a B.A. degree, and to be come a Chinese teacher in the public schools. Some day she wants to teach, share and give some knowledge, and skill to the children in the urban poor countries.
Judy and I been classmate since last summer school, so she give me a many details about her. Am just wondering if I can ask her some more information like her social security or bank account numbers? However, maybe she can break my neck or my bones, so I decided never ask her. Anyway, I found out she have good personality, kind, responsible and hard working mother.

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Old Sep 1, 2007, 09:49 PM   #2  
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What is this for? How long is this supposed to be?

Read it slowly out loud to someone (or to the mirror), and you will see many of your mistakes.

Are you a non-native English speaker?
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Old Sep 1, 2007, 10:03 PM   #3  
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You can also paste it to Microsoft works word processor and it will correct any spelling and attempt to fix some grammar errors. Just be careful it may try to change things that are correct.
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