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Old Aug 28, 2009, 04:45 PM
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Song writing trouble

Hello; I'm trying to start a band and It's going to be hard rock but I also want some calm piano songs on are Demo CD too. Kind of a Evanescence thing. But it is so hard wrighting songs. All I'm asking is for some one to turn my horrible songs into magic. Do not laugh when you read this but this is all I've got.

"What if there was no price to pay?
I'd do things my way
I wouldn't be bleeding my heart dry
We don't need this screaming
Don't yell at me becaues you prayed for me to die
If only I were breathing
I'd say to you goodbye
If only I left today......."

I know "Har Har" it sucks but give me a break I'm only 12 and it just came to me and I wrote it down. Anyway, please fix it or if you can wright a song for me useing my words. I would be so greatful. Thanks.

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Old Oct 11, 2009, 09:25 AM   #81  
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How many days have gone by?
Hard to tell in this blinding light
When will the sun come down?
Stop telling me to give up,
No not now!

Ooo, Where are you?
It's only far
After all they've put me through
Ooo, Where are you?
It's only me
But, also the truth

How many times have I said?
I was done, I'm turning back
If only you were here you would see
I'm not that kid

Ooo, where are you?
It's only far
After all they've put me through
Ooo, Where are you?
It's only me
But, also the truth

When will are time come?
Everything will fall into place
All of this madness will be done
We can simply watch the rain,
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Frozen whisper
Passing my lips
Holding you in place
Pull me down
To your sweet kisses
Pleading for forgivness

In there eye's
I see the fear
Burnging into thier minds
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Are you always cold?
Is this how you want to be?
Alone

Is there more to you?
Will you see past thier minds
Find the truth

Dirty mirror
I can't find myself
Why do you hide?
One single tear will fall
Tonight
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Can't forget my Solitude
Don't want to leave this Solitude
Forever bound with my Solitude
Never forgot this becaues.....
I couldn't let you go

Never said you were at fault
Just turns out were better off alone
And if I fall it's where I belong
Never thought that I could be so cold
Come and find me
Say all that's wrong with me?

Solitude
Close your eyes
Your safe behinde them
Solitude
Turn off the lights
Hide away from you...
Solitude
Safe inside of me


And I..
I was never to go this way
Run from you and cry
Somehow I'll breath
I'll find myself
Never forgot this
Becaues I couldn't let you go
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Do you feel alone?
Close your eyes your safe in the dark
Do you feel alone?
When they come and pass you by
Like your that kid out of line
Now tell me do you feel alone

We walk bleeding, lost and screaming
All this time
I've been beliving
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Tell me how to be
Strong enough
Tell me how to be
Good enough
Tell me how to be enough
For your love

They live with the fear
Bound to thier tears
I'm letting you know
I'll find my way out
Free of your lie

Tell me how to be
Strong enough
Tell me how to be
Good enough
Tell me how to be enough
For your love
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Stay love
Come to me and stay awhile
Never leave again
Me here with my lonnyness
never hide away
Just close your eyes
And find me

Come to me
Bring your sorrow
I'll take in your troubles
Then soon you'll see
Your just like me

You'll take in everything
Then run to cry
You hide in pain
Bleeding your heart dry

I Lay alone
Lost and cold agian
I've tried to take
Your burdon away
Now breaking me
I felt so safe
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We all hold back in silence
Afraid to fight
All your tears fade away
You can't cry
I stand beside you
Open your eyes
I know that this
Won't be the last lie

Say your not strong
It's all right
Tell how meaningless
This really is
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