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Home > Arts & Leisure > Music   »   How is my rap?

 
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Old Apr 5, 2008, 11:41 AM
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How is my rap?

im 16 and im english. how is my rap.
Im metaphysical systematically lyrical, on this microphone im like jesus bringin a miracle
Im a radical hanibal cannibal animaltyrannical puritannical who is lyrically mechanical
in my brain theres 2 much traffic im a manic im an antic
this im spittin its magic its a classic, bring ur hole army ill attack it, grab ur head n ill crack it. I eat up microphones when im frantic, its tragic, if u push out ur chest ill stab it plastic and ur torso ill mash it
I use napalm to bring harm, break arms 2 set off alarms
right down a lyric and spit it and add another gimmick, finf the window of a critic and brick it, bring ur click n ill get rid of it
my life has been corrupt since the day i was born, im suprised i havent grown my own tail and my own horns, with a pitckfork and only being able 2 out at dawn
ill tell u my life story but if u disresect me 4 it u'll get floored
everyday iv had 2 be prepared 2 be quick witted, pull some courage out of nowhere and get equipped with it
cos these haters create sum aim it my way and fling it, but iv always shouted at the top of my lungs jus bring it.

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Old Apr 5, 2008, 12:33 PM   #2  
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Wow well written I and my sister like it. You should put it to a recording studio.
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I like it, but just be careful about posting your rhymes, if they are good, people will steal them. It is a compliment to be stolen from, but it is better to record, copyright, and then see what people think!! If already copyrighted, disregard this message. Keep us posted on this!!
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