read this and tell me what you think

Becca74 · #1 Sep 30, 2007, 11:04 AM

he took my heart broke it in two
ripped it apart and shattered it right though
he never cared so why do i
sitting right here i start to cry
painful it hurts all you can do is say goodbye
try your best when u dont succeed
fall on your knees and start to pleed
why does it hurt so much...make it stop
maybe it will be better when i bleed
tears and blood fall down and plop on the floor
with one last breath its over i say...i love you once more

bluerose · Sep 30, 2007, 11:42 AM

I think its poetic.



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