Help me plzz....i m stuck...my english teacher asked me to write a suggestion on this poem...i m really stuck...i dunno wat to write...plzz help....have to write not a general comment but a specific observation about one part of the poem, a line or phrase...I can discuss word choice, or a literary device of one poem...or maybe compare the two poems...Plzz help me out....Thanks for ur support Plzz help me ...Plzz ....i m really stuck..

POEM 1

Somewhere on the other side of this wide night
and the distance between us, I am thinking of you.
The room is turning slowly away from the moon.

This is pleasurable. Or shall I cross that out and say
it is sad? In one of the tenses I singing
an impossible song of desire that you cannot hear.

La lala la. See? I close my eyes and imagine
the dark hills I would have to cross
to reach you. For I am in love with you and this

is what it is like or what it is like in words.



POEM 2

The want of you is like no other thing;
It smites my soul with sudden sickening;
It binds my being with a wreath of rue -
This want of you.

It flashes on me with the waking sun;
It creeps upon me when the day is done;
It hammers at my heart the long night through -
This want of you.

It sighs within me with the misting skies;
Oh, all the day within my heart it cries,
Old as your absence, yet each moment new -
This want of you.

Mad with demand and aching with despair,
It leaps within my heart and you are - where?
God has forgotten, or he never knew -
This want of you.