hi guys i need help in my work...i do not want to copy so do not close this topic. i want to write on:

Discuss the theme appearance vs reality in relation to both the great gatsby and hamlet.

i have some points which i wrote...if you have something in your mind share with me.

thank you

HelpinHere

It's due today? What time, and how long do you have? (as Afghanastan is a different time, so I'm unsure).

I'm sure you didn't get a 1000 word assignment with only one day to prepare.

You should have done it earlier, but I'm not going to preach to you because I procrastinate too xD

Well, good luck!
Don't cut corners, use plenty of adjectives, and get it done!

lucky_girl

after 5 hours.

lucky_girl

just got yesterday morning.

Wondergirl

No ESL teacher will give this very difficult assignment to students to be due in one day. In my high school, we would have been given two weeks at least.

Now, be honest. When did you get the assignment?

lucky_girl

she gave me yesterday...we read two of books before. that time she told us i will give you assignment so make sure you will work on that.

Wondergirl

I am a teacher, a librarian, and a published writer. I could not write 1000 words for this paper in only one day's time. If I were an ESL student, it would be impossible. Your teacher is wrong.

lucky_girl

i know that....i started to write..i have question should i write both gatsby and hamlet together or can i write first gatsby and than about hamlet.

can you give me some tips to make sure in essay.

Wondergirl

You can write two separate sections, or you can compare Hamlet to Gatsby. I cannot help you unless you write it and I proofread it. This assignment is too difficult for an ESL student for one day.

lucky_girl

she did not say compare and contrast...so i will write differently...anyways thank you so much for your help...can you give me some hints for gatsby.

Wondergirl

HelpinHere gave you this on the first page --

I'll expand upon what I said earlier.
The Great Gatsby
Gatsby surrounds himself with friends throughout the entire story. He throws huge parties quite often, inviting everyone in town and making a name for himself. However, he isn't at the parties. He is there, surrounded by all of these people, drinking, laughing, having a great time. However, they are not his friends. He does not know them, and only has them physically there to hid his own emotional loneliness for another day longer. He does not enjoy these social events; he creates a facade to show otherwise. He is surrounded by all of these people, entirely alone. He wears a smile while he feels eternal loneliness. Instead of being with friends, he is in reality only poisoning himself, and causing everything that could be positive around him to be filled with negative emotions.