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Old Jul 13, 2009, 10:04 PM
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English Essay

hi guys i need help in my work...i do not want to copy so do not close this topic. i want to write on:

Discuss the theme appearance vs reality in relation to both the great gatsby and hamlet.

i have some points which i wrote...if you have something in your mind share with me.

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Old Jul 14, 2009, 09:44 AM   #11  
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yes i read both book but i can not describe it so well tht's why i ask for help
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wondergirl....thank you so much for this site but i am not going to write from there because my teacher does not want me to write from internet....i know what i am writing...i discussed with my teacher what i wrote..if i want to write from site i won't come here for help
What you posted already was from that site:

"hamlet
As the play is told Hamlet finds out his father was murdered by the recently crowned king. The theme that remains constant throughout the play is appearance versus reality. Things within the play appear to be true and honest but in reality are infested with evil. Many of the characters within the play hide behind a mask of falseness. Four of the main characters that hid behind this mask are Polonius, Rosencrantz (Guildenstern), the king Cluadius. From behind this mask they give the impression of a person who is sincere and genuine, in reality they are plagued with lies and evil. There appearance will make it very difficult for Hamlet to uncover the truth, the characters hide behind."
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yes i read both book but i can not describe it so well tht's why i ask for help
You are not a native-English speaker? Which country are you in? Is this paper for an ESL class?
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Old Jul 14, 2009, 09:50 AM   #14  
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ya for esl class.....I am from afghanistan...can you help me?
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Old Jul 14, 2009, 09:59 AM   #15  
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ya for esl class.....I am from afghanistan...can you help me?
You want to write about this? "hamlet friendship with horatio and Gatsby and nick frienship"
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@Wondergirl: Good find, and thanks for the correction on "facade" (I also noticed I spelled Hamlet with a "p"! =P)

@lucky_girl:
Well, I asked for your input on Hamlet, not something you got from another site. This is your project, and I am choosing to help you in my free time. The least you could do is provide a little effort on this. You said you have work done on it, the fact that you aren't willing to share tells me that you might not have done any work at all.

Until we figure out what is really going on here (a ploy at plagerism, perhaps?) I don't think I should give you any more work.
People from all around plagarize, it isn't limited to America, and it doesn't exclude Afghanistan.

You came here for help. If you have any work, even if you don't think it is good, tell us, and we can help you make it better. However, you have to try to do some real work.
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no...i want to write on appearance vs reality in relation of both The Great Gatsby and Hamlet...i read books but don't know so well how to write in proper way.

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no...i want to write on appearance vs reality in relation of both The Great Gatsby and Hamlet...i read books but don't know so well how to write in proper way.

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What was fake (appearance) and what was real in Hamlet? and in Gatsby?
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i read books but don't know so well how to write in proper way.

thank you
That is fine. Tell us what you have, even if it isn't properly formatted, we can make it better.
We are here to help you with your work, not to do it for you.
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Talk about Gatsby's parties to which he invited supposed friends, parties that he did not even attend (fake, appearance) and compare that with his real friendship with Nick, his next-door neighbor. Why were Gatsby and Nick friends?

parties = appearance
Nick = real
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