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Corrections needed

Can some one please correct this for me?
Please make sure that I used all the rules of grammar, spelling, and punctuation

People have argued and suggested that using word processor on ones computer is fare more advanced, rather then using a pencil and paper. Word processor and hand writing with a pencil and paper can get the same amount of work accomplished. Some might ask, ”what is the difference between using ones writing skills with a pencil and paper as to using word processing”? One of the benefits of word processing is spell check; it can recognize when you make a spelling or grammar mistake and it can be easily corrected. However, with writing skills using a pencil and paper you’re more likely to misspell words with out notice. In addition to word processor you can easily modify your text with numerous of stills, one being the color of your text by easily selecting a desired color. In order to change the color of text with a pencil you would need to use different coloring pencils which are time consuming. In conclusion I would agree that word processor is fare more superior then using a pencil and paper.

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I will make corrections in bold:

People have argued and suggested that using a word processor on ones computer is far more advanced, rather than using a pencil and paper. A word processor and hand writing with a pencil and paper can get the same amount of work accomplished. Some might ask, ”What is the difference between using ones writing skills with a pencil and paper as to using word processing?". One of the benefits of word processing is spell check; it can recognize when you make a spelling or grammar mistake and it can be easily corrected. However, with writing skills, using a pencil and paper you’re more likely to misspell words with out notice. In addition to a word processor you can easily modify your text with numerous of stills, one being the color of your text by easily selecting a desired color. In order to change the color of text with a pencil you would need to use different coloring pencils which are time consuming. In conclusion I would agree that a word processor is far more superior than using a pencil and paper.


I don't know if I got everything and if this is even what you are looking for.

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