Trouble with essay writing.

dave146 · #1 Nov 30, 2008, 10:23 AM

My literature tests are coming soon... and I´m supposed to write an essay. Well, that would be easy, of course, but I have a difficult topic and that is Why is democracy good. Well, that wouldn´t be that hard of course, but I am allowed to write only the positives, not the negatives...

Im not asking you to write the essay for me, but Im really confused, because democracy has negatives too, and Im quite a honest person and it is hard for me not to write the negatives as well.

Again, I dont want you to do the thing for me, just give me an idea, Im used to being objective and realistic, and the tutor is asking me to write about the ideal democracy, which I just cannot do.

Once again, I dont want anyone to do this for me, just help me, give me an idea.

Thanks!

Have a nice day.

KBC · Nov 30, 2008, 10:53 AM

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dave146 · Nov 30, 2008, 11:00 AM

thanks

KBC · Nov 30, 2008, 11:05 AM

did it help?

tell me how it did.

Others can chime in and assist you if you write some on what you are going to turn in.

dave146 · Nov 30, 2008, 12:11 PM

Okay, I just covered the whole thing in like two pages, I got the basics, but Ill write about 10... thanks dude!Youre a helper.

Clough · Dec 1, 2008, 05:38 AM

Hi, dave146!

It would help if we could know the specific instructions that you were given by your instructor concerning writing the essay.

Thanks!

dave146 · Dec 1, 2008, 10:48 AM

he didnt say anything, just write an essay, hes your topic, write it well, good luck... I have it on tape, if you want proof.

yaode3zy · Mar 3, 2009, 11:59 PM

From your lectures/class studies, you should have an idea of some possitive aspects of democracy.
If it were me, I would prepare the essay in the typical "Intro," "Body," and "Conclusion" format. Within the body paragraphs, I would discuss the good points and support the points with how other political systems opperate and why democracy is better.
In the conclusion, I would include something like "Democracy it not perfect, but democracy allows for all people to have a voice... etc. (restate you points)" as a concluding thesis.

That's my 2 cents on how I would approach this essay. Hope it helps.



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