I can give it a shot...perhaps something like,
"Three weeks ago, our son David was seriously injurred as a result of an explosion and fire (name where). Learning his life was in danger, of course we were not sure what to do, or where to turn first. We were very fortunate that (EMS workers by name, hospitals, other first response people) stepped in immediately with tremdous knowledge, competence and grace, and took care of everything that needed to be done to save his life and minimize the impacts of this terrible disaster. At home, without being asked, or even thinking twice, our extended family, friends, neighbors and the community, including many people we do not know, came forward with donations, meals, and countless thoughtful gestures of hope, caring and practical assistance. We are very grateful. As a family of faith, we are particularly touched by the heartfelt prayers said on behalf of David and those of us who love him.
He is gaining strength every day, and we know that this showing of support and love has meant a great deal in his recovery. To a community who truly cares, we thank you for your kindness and support"
Dave and Norma (Hennings)Jones and all of us in the Hennings and Jones families.
I'll send one more prayer your way - glad to hear he's doing better.