Thesis statement assistance

Timeka · #1 Feb 20, 2007, 07:24 AM

How do you write a thesis for a descriptive paper when the subject is about the ocean's colors, the coral reefs colors, and the colors of the fish in the ocean?

RickJ · Feb 20, 2007, 07:28 AM

What is the educational level of the person doing the paper?
Not that I'm a guru on the subject, but I can help with some ideas

Timeka · Feb 20, 2007, 07:36 AM

Hard to imagine but i'm a freshman in college and I'm not even sure if the paper will work. My original topic was describing a snorkeling trip but after submitting the draft I was told "there is a great deal of personal persuasion in your essay"...
I have no more time on this paper and I need help a guru would actually be great!

Capuchin · Feb 20, 2007, 07:45 AM

I can only really help with scientific format and academic paper format, things like that. I have experience preparing reports about physics phenomena. If that's useful to you, please let me know.

I'm not sure If i totally understand what you want

Capuchin · Feb 20, 2007, 08:00 AM

If you need anythign other than that then you will have to wait for other users to pick it up, but i'm listening to this thread now so let me know



At Ask Me Help Desk you can ask questions in any topic and have them answered for free by our experts. To ask questions or participate in answering them you must register for a free account. By registering you will be able to: Get free answers from experts in any of our 300+ topics. Accept money for answers that you provide. Communicate privately with other members (PM). See fewer ads. Sign Up!